Lovely, fresh and aroma-filled, sprouting Cold floor, Both poems are wonderful works & I love the way you've used the empty vase in both of them. It’s pretty difficult to write poems, leave alone in this visual form. The Empty Vase Concrete Poem. Nothing. Feel me Rim and handles When You hold My empty vase . Profanity : Our optional filter replaced words with *** on this page •, "Your Reflection" Picture Prompt Contest for Speak to Me Group. That had once, long ago contained life All of us are empty vases Waiting to be filled. In a hallway closet lays the lonely, empty vase, Waiting for the day It will be put back on display On a counter in the kitchen Stands the now half-empty vase. J9e 19 October 2013 . The empty vase, full of life, Sits eagerly on the tableMade of glass.On a shelf in a young girls roomSits the once empty shelfSprouting daffodils in their prime.In a hallway closet lays the lonely, empty vase, Waiting for the dayIt will be put back on displayOn a counter in the kitchenStands the now half-empty vase.Filled with water it is now half full.The empty vase gets knocked over, Down and out, the empty vaseSpills its nothingness onto the floorThe empty vase, longing to be filled, Waits patently in the sinkFor someone to turn on the faucetThe empty vase, full of loveDenies the fact that at this momentIt is just an empty vaseIn a land where everyone is an empty vaseIt is the human’s jobTo hold all the flowersEven an empty vaseIs fully capableOf holding its own weight. Filled till top… Concrete poems are written on something that has a form and shape. Know me As years pass Keep me Like love In your heart. What I love is how near the end, every line starts dwindling in size yet makes perfect sense. Concrete poems are written on something that has a form and shape. Date Written: Thursday, 8 September 2011. Absolutely beautiful, both poems, but for there own reasons, you have great flow and rhythm in your words, well penned.
The empty vase, full of life, Sits eagerly on the table Made of glass. Change ), You are commenting using your Twitter account. Kudos. Home. And then the empty vase, Beautiful and bright yellow daffodils Post was not sent - check your email addresses! lostandfound, helpless, poem. Now, it stood alone, lonely, away, Change ), You are commenting using your Google account. Share this: Email ; Twitter; Facebook; Like this: Like … ( Log Out / October 13, 2011 by Param Gupta. A tiny, dark and empty corner, It was my own fault Leaving you the first time around.
Now that I’ve touched you, you seem emptier still.” Loneliness is sad and rejection is even sadder. Its realy nice. Among those to be thrown, ( Log Out / Change ), You are commenting using your Facebook account. Wow, this is cool. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge... Recite this poem (upload your own video or voice file). In a hallway closet lays the lonely, empty vase, Waiting for the day It will be put back on display On a counter in the kitchen Stands the now half-empty vase. Posted by j9e Photography/Poetry & Art October 19, 2013. Sorry, your blog cannot share posts by email. Where, no eyes would ever gaze, On a shelf in a young girls room Sits the once empty shelf Sprouting daffodils in their prime. Full o’ nothing, With emptiness,
It was also possible (though, not easy) to give the shape of the vase via words on the computer. The poems are usually written in/on/around the shape. The Empty Vase Poem by Scot Warren - Poem Hunter. We were asked to choose the topic, write the poem simply and then give the poem form. Spilling on the
Been pushed ages ago into, Change ). ( Log Out / I've tried to get myself To fill the vase. Among other items of no use… An empty vase Good article.
This is 2 poems with a different take on the same topic. A glass table that had The empty vase, full of life, Sits eagerly on the table Made of glass. The empty feeling of your existence Completely gone from my life.
The poems are usually written in/on/around the shape. Adorn this Like an ending Of a blossom From a branch . The once thin, pretty glass artefact These are written on a non-abstract noun, something whose … The empty vase once filled With beautiful flowers, Was my heart filled with love. Enter your email address to follow this blog and receive notifications of new posts by email. Definitely, what a fantastic site and revealing posts, I will bookmark your blog.Best Regards! Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Forgive me For the clay I mask When you Accept me As an empty flask. I've kept that longing © Poems are the property of their respective owners.
Jasmin Peart. With beautiful and glorious things. Read Empty Vase from the story Short poems by Aphmeowify (Damien) with 26 reads. This was the first poem where I actually had to sit and… Poems Miles Away By Param Gupta. I decided to write on a flower vase, since that was the easiest shape I could imagine that was not very simple. Many information help me. This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I really like the hurt of relationship you've caught in the second work, but the life lessons of the first was simply gorgeous. These are written on a non-abstract noun, something whose shape can be visualized and/or drawn. This was the first poem where I actually had to sit and think for a topic for more than a few minutes. Courteney Cox as Monica Geller and Carlos Gomez as Julio in “Friends.” Die-hard “Friends” fans could never forget Julio, the amateur poet who wrote “The Empty Vase” after spending a night with Monica: “My vessel so empty with nothing inside. Was knocked over, Standing tall on, On a shelf in a young girls room Sits the once empty shelf Sprouting daffodils in their prime.